Where Were You Then, Why Are You Here Now

by Sorinity   Sep 18, 2008


Where were you when i needed a shoulder
I needed someone to make me boulder.
Where were you when i needed a friend
I thought i my world came to an end.
Where were you when i needed something to live for
Cried every night just wishing for more.

Now that i have him here you appear
now you want to fight all my fears.
A penny short and a day too late
I've found prince charming and i feel great.
I was just a toy to you
and now to my heart I must be true.

Where were you when i needed a shoulder
I needed someone to make me boulder.
Where were you when i needed a friend
I thought i my world came to an end.
Where were you when i needed something to live for
Cried every night just wishing for more.

================================
this is actually a song i wrote so if you don't see how it flows sorry but i cant quite put up my tune for it. i am always open for suggestions and especially on this one that i have not finished.
thank you and blessed be :D

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    There is a rhythm to every heart, a beat to every true tune I think and your poem demonstrates the importance of timing
    or harmonious relationships

    well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Love it. if this were a song i would have it on my fav's list. i absolutly love sad or love or hurt related songs. love the flow and you have an amazing gift so keep writing! KM

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem is very good and I enjoyed reading it. It's sad yet beautiful ^^
    The only 1 little thing is to make sure you capitalize all of your 'I's other than that wicked job

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless

    Well I'm sure if this poem were turn into a song, it would be a great song...maybe u should try to make the tune from the heart
    I'm sure u'll get it right... and when you do do give me a buzz, coz i can so relate this poem to my life

    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    Your work just keeps getting better and better. I really like this one. Much much better flow and rhyming scheme. :)

Read All Comments (5)

More Poems By Sorinity