Beautiful

by Vince Gullaci   Sep 18, 2008


I don't know
what it means
it was in a dream
in some nether region
between
asleep
and awake
where life was more beautiful
than a rose.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Vince Gullaci

    Great comments Shellaine,
    Much appreciated,
    Vince.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    The title of the poem was simple yet really drew me in. it was short yet your words were so passionate and powerful. i really agree with the previous comment about how beautiful this poem is. i loved reading it, it was really different to the usual poems which i read, i truly stunning job!!! keep it up, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Vince Gullaci

    Thank you Melissa,
    A lovely comment.
    I wish you all the best,
    Vince

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    The title is certainly right... This poem is nothing less than beautiful. Very nice! ;o)

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