Peaceful river

by Smilie   Sep 18, 2008


A poem is a peaceful river
that runs through your soul
flowing slowly and taking any
obstacles out the way
so serene, so pure
so calming to a troubled soul

the river washes away
all your sadness
and carries with it, all
your tears
making you put on a
pretty smile after you are done
promising you it would
always be there-
all you have to do it...
pick up a pen and write away

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  • 16 years ago

    by NoUr

    The poem was soft, simple & true

    i really liked it a lot, enjoyed reading it...

    A poem is a peaceful river
    that runs through your soul
    flowing slowly and taking any
    obstacles out the way
    so serene, so pure
    so calming to a troubled soul

    ^^a poem is indeed a peaceful river...wow...amazing how u described wat a poem can do in such a nice way...so true

    u made it sound so simple to put a smile on our face...

    good job, the poem was lovely...

    keep writing!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Smilie

    Really thanx

  • 16 years ago

    by infrangible angel

    I really like this poem it sounds so beautiful when you read it aloud

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