The Child in Him

by jenpiglet17   Sep 18, 2008


I love the child in him
so innocent and sweet
the mischief in his eyes
the blush upon his cheek
the tender way he spoke
that showed me that he cared
the touch of his warm hand
that gently touched my hair
the smiles that we shared
that filled my life with glee
for when I was with him
I found the child in me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I love this poem and thought that it was very good. I don't have anything bad to say about it. I really liked it and felt that it was very well done.

    I really wish to be able to write love poems like this. Truly a great poem, you should be very proud to have done this poem.

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by angelis

    I absolutly love this poem.
    The ending was so cute
    5/5
    nicely done =]

  • 16 years ago

    by Sapphire

    Very good poem I love how you use his qualities, to put in the last lline "the child in me" 5/5

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