Very good poem I love how you use his qualities, to put in the last lline "the child in me" 5/5

I absolutly love this poem.
The ending was so cute
5/5
nicely done =]

I love this poem and thought that it was very good. I don't have anything bad to say about it. I really liked it and felt that it was very well done.

I really wish to be able to write love poems like this. Truly a great poem, you should be very proud to have done this poem.

5/5.