Bright Skies {Haiku}

by BREEawNUHH   Sep 19, 2008


--My FIRST Haiku. Be nice. :P

Beautiful bright skies,
wind blowing my hair softly
trees swaying gently.

Briana Coulter
09.19.08

**A Haiku is a Japanese form that consists of three lines where the first line has 5 syllables, second line has 7, and the third has 5.

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  • 15 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Kinda makes me think of, those peaceful moments where you just lie diwn on the grass, and look at the clouds. Or when you're on a bench, just watching around.
    nicely written ^^

  • 15 years ago

    by Mommys Lil Angel

    Very calm for ur first and very awsome i like it n i hope to see more

    love lotz
    katie
    5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by sneha

    Very cute write.5

  • 15 years ago

    by Good Enough

    Its cute sweet and short love it 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Nice! :B

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