Great haiku, you depicted such a beautiful scene in my mind. Nice job. Keep writing, always and forever...

This was well done, and paints yet another wonderful picture in the readers mind as if they could paint it the description is well. I can imagine being outside, the sky so bright, the wind blowing my hair and the trees swaying back and forth. Such a beautiful scene! :] Wellll doneee. 5/5 Keep it up!

I liked it alot. i was... delicate and sweet.

Im not much of a haiku guy
but i have to say, this was pretty good
it made sense
it was nice imagery
i say 5/5
=]

Beautifully said, just enough to fill the heart with a nice comfy feeling.

It was good!!!

This was so beautiful and such a tranquil piece, for your first this was really really well done so you should really give yourself credit for that!!!! I love the positive and peaceful energy i felt whilst reading this, great job!!!! hope 2 see another one from you soon!!!

Bree,

wel done on your first Haiku..I discovered this form just a few months ago and I love them. Such a compact form, one that can be worked out on a mobile, via a text message.

Well done, a great job, lovely imagery.

Michael

Sensitive and yet powerful nice very nice........

Nice! :B

Its cute sweet and short love it 5/5

Very cute write.5

Very calm for ur first and very awsome i like it n i hope to see more

love lotz
katie
5/5

Kinda makes me think of, those peaceful moments where you just lie diwn on the grass, and look at the clouds. Or when you're on a bench, just watching around.
nicely written ^^