Comments : Lazy August Afternoon (Song)

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    I loved this the first time I read it.

    It's a Lazy August Afternoon
    Hope it doesn't end too soon
    I'm floating like a toy balloon
    This Lazy August Afternoon

    Such a feeling of peace and contentment...Just lazing back enjoying the day :)

    Close my eyes and slip away
    To Dreamland, Mars and Mandelay
    So long world, I'?m on my way
    Here I go, but here I stay

    Love this stanza.....daydreaming taking a journey in your mind but never going anywhere.

    Lolling and barefootin'
    City sootin' on my patio
    I say hello and wave one toe
    To my neighbor way down below

    This stanza made me smile....I can just picture you waving that toe saying hi to the neighbor below :)

    Really enjoyed the read :)
    Take Care
    Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    This one just makes you happy upon reading...

    "Lolling and barefootin'
    City sootin' on my patio
    I say hello and wave one toe
    To my neighbor way down below"

    ^^^This is just too cute! Another great one, Corinne! ;o)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Love this. Sounds like the things I love to do on a lazy August afternoon. We seem to enjoy the same things. 5/5