My Mind

by Emotionz   Sep 19, 2008


I feel so many feelings,
I don't know how to express,
So many things go through my head,
Its all tied up in a mess.

Feels like I'm going insane,
Head pounding and aching,
Thinking and feeling,
Feels like its breaking.

Fears the thought most in my head,
I fear allot of things,
Most of all dying,
When i die i hope i get my wings.

I'm not ready to die,
but we all will eventually,
Knowing that scares me,
So it wouldn't matter if i died intentionally.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hi i found your poem a bit disturbing and hope these are not true feelings. It was well written with a fairly good flow

    Fear's, the thought most in my head,
    I fear allot of things,
    Most of all DYING
    When i die i hope i get my wings,

    look at the changes i made here , fear needed an apostrophe and dying was spelled wrong, also rather remove all comma's at the end of a sentence, its very distracting especialy if the poem is well written like yours
    Well done

    Grant

  • 16 years ago

    by Mrs Bunny Brown

    I can tell u right now ur awsome and i really like this poem cuz its how i feel every day

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