I can tell u right now ur awsome and i really like this poem cuz its how i feel every day

Hi i found your poem a bit disturbing and hope these are not true feelings. It was well written with a fairly good flow

Fear's, the thought most in my head,
I fear allot of things,
Most of all DYING
When i die i hope i get my wings,

look at the changes i made here , fear needed an apostrophe and dying was spelled wrong, also rather remove all comma's at the end of a sentence, its very distracting especialy if the poem is well written like yours
Well done

Grant