TJ's puzzle of love

by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash   Sep 19, 2008


TJ's puzzle of love

Alright TJ listen close
Puzzle pieces lying loose, are always gross
What you need is a wooden frame
Or a piece of board it's all the same

Spread some glue, stick them down
Don't leave the pieces lying around
When you think it's built to last
Place upon it some fragile glass

Do not fear its fragile fame
That's why you built the wooden frame
Now turn it around and add some string
That more or less completes the thing

So gather all the pieces loose
Listen close there's lots to choose
Carefully prepare a frame of trust
Lots of truth and a touch of lust

Now you spread the love on thick
Remember to much love won't make her sick
Passion, joy, honesty and devotion
She'll appreciate loves great ocean

Now once you have love's puzzle down
Place your frame of trust around
Remember don't hang on her all the time
That's what breaks love's fragile line

Grant

18h56
19.09.2008
Copyright © 2008 Grant Mark Gilbert

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  • 16 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow, You put alot of though into this lovely poem. It is unique and I really enjoyed readin it. Everything about it was so perfect. I love your last four phrases they were so heartfelt and true. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    I love what you have writen for my dear friend TJ.
    I could not have said it better myself;)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Paiger

    Great Poem, I love the metaphors, all very easy to connect to. It really paints a picture in my head of a grandfather telling his grandson to "treat women right" kinda thing. Very cute, and touching, it really gives you that warm fuzzy feeling. great expression :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Rose Blooming

    A great poem to a great kid haha. well done Grant what a gem you are.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Oh my gosh, this was just beautiful I was so touched and captivated y this poem, it was just such a beautiful piece. very heartfelt and unique. It really helped me a lot after whats been happening in my life lately, you always amaze me with each poem you write being so powerful no matter what the genre is, you always manage to pull of an unbelievable piece. I absolutely loved this poem, it truly was such a moving piece!!! 100/5:)

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