Oh my god that is sooo good! amazing!

Oh my gosh, this was just beautiful I was so touched and captivated y this poem, it was just such a beautiful piece. very heartfelt and unique. It really helped me a lot after whats been happening in my life lately, you always amaze me with each poem you write being so powerful no matter what the genre is, you always manage to pull of an unbelievable piece. I absolutely loved this poem, it truly was such a moving piece!!! 100/5:)

A great poem to a great kid haha. well done Grant what a gem you are.

Great Poem, I love the metaphors, all very easy to connect to. It really paints a picture in my head of a grandfather telling his grandson to "treat women right" kinda thing. Very cute, and touching, it really gives you that warm fuzzy feeling. great expression :)

I love what you have writen for my dear friend TJ.
I could not have said it better myself;)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Wow, You put alot of though into this lovely poem. It is unique and I really enjoyed readin it. Everything about it was so perfect. I love your last four phrases they were so heartfelt and true. 5/5