It is better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all...that was a quote we had to work on a little while ago. I think it is very true and we should be glad for the beautiful moments we had with our beloved ones, don't you?
Much beautiful poem, Azzza!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

A wonderful Poem, Your words mean s much, very touching, A Beautiful poem
5/5 from me.

Wow, this was great. particularly the ending i really loved.
But then again
for some, they're afraid
that it's not going to be the same
reality has got them chain
They're afraid of changing lanes
^^ so much truth in your words.. You wrote about it very uniquely and it was fantastic.

They travel the same road
carrying the same load
not knowing that it is better to go by boat
they keep on going
their plans for their future
in which they have already wrote
forgetting that it can always be erase and be rewrote
^^ this is.. amazing. i dont even know how to describe it.. the truth in this.. is crazy.. its brilliantly written.
Many people live their lives in fear of what may happen... so well written.

5/5

"We only live once
one shot and one chance
to take this love trance
and advance"
^I like that stanza. I think it stands out well, and has great flow.

Do you mean to have this poem untitled? Because I think it would be great with one. Awesome job, and thanks for the comment. :)

This sounds so personal, maybe an experience you have actually had. I love the emotional feel of taking the chance, sharing the unshared with that certain someone.
Definitely from the heart in my opinion
Super
Connie