Great message in this poem! keep up the good word and keep writing! 5/5

Dear Azzza,

When two people are meant to be, they will find a way to be together, I am sure of that.
I think it was pretty special you wrote it from her point of view. You made a beautiful and meaningful poem:)
I know from bitter experience an online love affair is very difficult to endure..you long for the other so much...

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Your rhyming works really well. I love this poem. I'm sure many people can relate, and that's important. Nice work, and thanks for the comment. :)

I'm not very keen on haikus either, but I had to do them for a class, so I put them on here. Thanks for the input.

Wow.. amazing! your poem is stunning.. i love the message, the terms you used.. its great , begiining to end! keep up the good work ur doing an awsome job!

Great poem. 5/5 and the wording is great.

You're now in your twenties
clutching on to your secret diaries
your heart is struggling to breathe
not wanting to regret the moments you didn't seize
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Your poems always say so much, I believe it speaks what your heart seem to scream and done in such a wonderful flow and worded so all can relate.
The above stanza is perfection, it grabbed me and wouldn't let go.
Connic