by HollyNichole Sep 19, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Teetering on the edge |
Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5 |
Wow i really loved this poem, your words were truly haunting and really reflected the pain of not being able to be with the person you love. i know exactly how you feel, i was with this amazing guy who i really loved but i became really depressed for about two weeks as i lost my brother who i was extremely close to and my boyfriend said he just couldn't cope with the depression and so left me for another girl if only people could understand the pain which they cause others and how they hurt others. your words were so powerful and i am sure that a lot of people can really relate to you. great job, keep it up and take car1!! |
by ChaoticallyMe
The Beauty.. |