Comments : Lover's Death (collab)

  • 16 years ago

    by Tangible heartache

    Wow Val this collab was AMAZING!!! the descriptive words, and imagary was great! I could picture it, and the emotion was so deep and tear bringing. It was so cute and sweet. You guys make awesome collab partners, this was really good. I enjoyed reading this, and it made me cry. ^.^ Great poem Val, Really, it was very very veryyyyyy good!!!!!!!!! XD

    5/5 of course!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by TwitcH

    Voila!!! A great poem......just AMAZING and there's something i really like 2 share it wid u....
    THNX 4 ur comment first of all....and for ur poem....i really got into it , it was just tooooo deep 2 keep me off it and really liked the intensity and sadness and presentation---
    JUST EXCELLENT....It was as if i was hearing a story from a person who reaaly felt it...
    NWYZ...JUST SIMPLY GR8 and ya...
    Not to forget ur lovely partner...whoever it is.....
    LOOKIN forward 2 hear more from u...
    TC and KEEP IN TOUCH...... :P