Alone But For Your Love

But through it all, theirs one, <- Theirs should be there's .
It's you.
Um , it's wierd because only half the poem rhymes .. I think you should go over it and maybe try to make the first two stanzas match the rest of the poem . Otherwise , i really like it . 4/5

Aww..so sweet! I loved this, it is really well written!
I bet she loved it, when you gave it to her!

Take care!

5/5 Ingrid

Omgosh this is just too cute for words. nice write, i really liked the format and the easy flow. 5/5 ~KM~

That is just the cutest thing I have read in a while ^.^

My favourite part:

"One thousand faces,
I'm still blind.
One thousand voices,
I'm completly deaf.

But through it all, theirs one,
It's you."

That definatly has the strongest meaning behind it.
=] your gf is very lucky ^.^

5/5
~FountainsOfBlood