Comments : Alone But For Your Love

  • 16 years ago

    by FountainsOfBlood

    That is just the cutest thing I have read in a while ^.^

    My favourite part:

    "One thousand faces,
    I'm still blind.
    One thousand voices,
    I'm completly deaf.

    But through it all, theirs one,
    It's you."

    That definatly has the strongest meaning behind it.
    =] your gf is very lucky ^.^

    5/5
    ~FountainsOfBlood

  • 16 years ago

    by Kimberley

    Omgosh this is just too cute for words. nice write, i really liked the format and the easy flow. 5/5 ~KM~

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aww..so sweet! I loved this, it is really well written!
    I bet she loved it, when you gave it to her!

    Take care!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    But through it all, theirs one, <- Theirs should be there's .
    It's you.
    Um , it's wierd because only half the poem rhymes .. I think you should go over it and maybe try to make the first two stanzas match the rest of the poem . Otherwise , i really like it . 4/5