by Samantha Sep 20, 2008
category :
Friendship, family /
goodbye
In memory of my closest friend my sister Aimee who moved so she could be with her boyfriend...... |
by mandy
Very nice. A couple things you could work on, is writing your poems in smaller stanzas so that the reader can follow easier. And try to extend your vocabulary so that the reader will become more fascinated in what you're explaining. Besides that your poem was wonderfuly expressed and from the heart. It was simply a pleasure to read. 5/5 |