No goodbye for me

by Samantha   Sep 20, 2008


In memory of my closest friend my sister Aimee who moved so she could be with her boyfriend......

Your gone now, there is not much I can do. I'll miss you and you know it is true. I'll live my life with emptyness now your gone I can not see you, hug you or kiss you. Goodbye is a hard thing to do but I didn't even get that. You left with him on the phone you told me to go to class and walked away... I felt my face crumple in pain and the tears spill over.

I tried to stop them but failed I saw you after that and you smiled at me an blew me a kiss.... That's the worst thing you've done I cried harder and you didn't seem to care you just smiled and walked away... Now your gone with no goodbye and I'm finding it hard to survive my heart has a whole and the piece left with you never to be seen again.

All I have left to say is goodbye I'll miss you but your not here to hear it be said or to see the pain it causes me. I hope you enjoy moving away all because of him...

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  • 16 years ago

    by mandy

    Very nice. A couple things you could work on, is writing your poems in smaller stanzas so that the reader can follow easier. And try to extend your vocabulary so that the reader will become more fascinated in what you're explaining. Besides that your poem was wonderfuly expressed and from the heart. It was simply a pleasure to read. 5/5

    -mandy :)