My smile is fake
but you said you were never hurt
but I know its you who is suffering now that I am
gone and all you have left
is the walls to sing you there truthful yet painful song

Your first line , did you mean "my" or 'your " smile is fake

My smile is fake
but you said you were never hurt
but I know its you who is suffering now that I am
gone and all you have left
ARE the walls to sing you THEIR truthful yet painful song

Your poem is a well written testament to your maturity of your situation and i'm so proud to see your growth, it also shows in your poems and the way you write.Well done Shellaine

Grant