This a wonderful poem...i really enjoyed reading it... :)...so beautifully written...great choice of wordz 5/5

This piece, to me, just seemed to be filled with words. By that, I mean, that the words didn't seem to interact with one another - they didn't make lines, but rather, were just lines of words. I just felt it had no story, or point. I apologise if this seems harsh, but I can't explain it any better, sorry.

Brad