This was such a beautiful write. You described this so well that I could have painted a picture using the description, it was that good. The syllable count seems to be correct as far as I see. I'm very impressed. Glad to see that you tried this form, it's really fun to play around with. I loved the word choice and description of this write. It is very beautiful. Well done! 5/5. :]

This was a very nice write.
I've never tried a nonet myself, but im sure it was a bit of a challenge that i think you handled very well.

the count was perfect..i know cause i counted xP .. lol, not that i dont trust you, but just to check. and i like the way you split the last sentence up into the last 3 lines -- very clever and ended the poem beautifully x)

overall.. i really enjoyed reading it.

This is a beautiful nonet and the natural imagery goes deeper and rises above

"Puffy white clouds cover up the sun"
- I love your usage of the word "puffy". I could actually imagine big puffy clouds in my head. (:

"while children go play
and laugh loudly"
- This was such wonderful imagery. Amazingly done.

For your first nonet, this was nothing short of fantastic. Your word usage was simple, yet perfect & your use of imagery was magnificent. Nicely done.

5.5
Take care,
Stephanie.