I liked it. It was an ok poems. The flow seemed a little off to me thought and it is a bit shorter then what I would like. Other then that it is an ok poem. 4/5

I liked it. It was an ok poems. The flow seemed a little off to me thought and it is a bit shorter then what I would like. Other then that it is an ok poem. 4/5

I liked it. It was an ok poems. The flow seemed a little off to me thought and it is a bit shorter then what I would like. Other then that it is an ok poem. 4/5