Very creative. nice work

I am amazed by this one, very cleverly written. I am also fascinated by amount of passion which you put into your pieces. Only thing that I didn't like is rhyme crying-flying. But that is not important that much because you created a true masterpiece here, in my opinion. I could really feel your words, and each vivid picture is followed with strong emotions, I like that.
Well done, you once again didn't fail to leave me speechless.