This poem brought tears to my eyes... such a sad story that kept you crying from beginning to end.

I really hope this isn't true...

5/5

T

This poem is very powerful, well written, and it makes you feel like your there, experiencing everything that the girl went through. It brought tears to my eyes and it was beautiful, in a sad way. It was wonderful. 5/5

Great poem =]

Sad, but beautifully written. You're great at expressing emotion.

This is a really sad story, she was kind but nothing ever went her way. I know that alot of people may be able to relate to some part of this. Written wonderfully though, without a doubt. 5/5, Em

This was a really sad poem 4realz...but i really loved it...it was really sad that she lost everything that she loved....it was very beautiful....u keep writing cuz u do it oh so well
5/5