Interesting choice of words. The whole poem had a riveting truth to it. I'm not usually a fan of wordy lines, but sometimes you can not get the whole emotion without making it a bit wordy. To me, this read more like a story and had interesting strong words to keep my attention. I enjoyed reading and the strength of words were just right. Thanks for a great read. 5/5

The thing that stuck out to me here was your flawless flow. It was amazing how you worded everything without disrupting its natural flow. Your word choice just blew me away. Some people use new and big words in their poems to make them stand out but they fail because it doesnt make sense but you surely do have a talent of sewing you words together to make a flawless masterpiece. You took the title and truly made it your own making this a wonderful and interesting piece to read. Also full of emotion making it easy to relate with.

Congrats on the win! You deserved it. I will nominate this.

Well done.
*5/5*

Ahhh ii loved it! (:
it was really amazinqq.
dha flow was qood and ii could feel dha emotion.
my favorite part was

"What shall happen as delicate dreams crumble and wane?
Lives become tainted and shriek as efforts tumble in vain.
Wants and failures control the DNA of our soul's craving distress.
Past experiences are scorched to cinders as minds are left a mess."

5/5.

-antoniaaa*

I loved it...

Awesome job.
Truly fealt it....

5/5

Keep it up xD

This is absolutley amazing and its crazy how someone can enter my mind and write what i cannot

Wow. this is a beautiful poem. deep, powerful, emotional, well descriptive. it is an amazing poem. i love it. well written, i can feel the meaning of it. goodjob.
--lovedroughtmelody

Thats well written
5/5
gud rhymewords used
and that went well with the thought u want to potray.

I felt that this poem was very well presented. As are all of your poems that I have read so far.

I enjoyed this but once agian the flow came into effect, it once again wasn't enough to take away from the poem fully, but was enough to mention.

I think that this poem is very well done. One of my favorite poems that you've done.

5/5

Nicely writtten i loved it your truelly good at this lol so far the best poems and poet i read today truelly amazing keep up the good work