Windows

by StarGirl   Sep 21, 2008


Windows

Worlds are right outside my window.
Inside I can't tell which way the wind blows.
Nobody seems to notice the door doesn't
deem you to redemption. The sensation
only felt by those
who look outside the window.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Minkus

    I'm going to refrain voting on this poem until I can see what the 4th line looks like without what I assume are unintentional errors. Tell me when it's edited.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    Too find out which way the wind blows from the window inside. watch the direction of the leaves floating by other then that I don't know where this poem is going.

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