This Storm

by reJoyce   Sep 21, 2008


We're running through this city
Under dark clouds and main street lights
Tired from never slowing down
And all the stupid fights

Fake apathy sparks apologies
While flash floods and lightning strike
Let down again, we drown again
And hope is out of sight

Let the rain pour
Let the sky roar
With rain drops like marbles
We will make it through this storm

To give up or give in
Deciding is like fighting the wind
But if we just hope and try
Our hearts will surely win

So let the rain pour
Let the sky roar
With rain drops like marbles
We will make it through this storm

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  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Short but really good :) fav lines

    Fake apathy sparks apologies
    While flash floods and lightning strike
    Let down again, we drown again
    And hope is out of sight

    the wording was just perfect and hit me :)
    keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Its kinda greaat portraying about storm. it has a great thoughts that was very well express and very outstanding. the whole message is realy so true.. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    "To give up or give in
    Deciding is like fighting the wind
    But if we just hope and try
    Our hearts will surely win"

    Beautiful wording and descriptions in this stanza and in the whole poem. I really liked this write, it was so enjoyable to read, good work! Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    They were really good visuals and the flow was good. I like how you made an arguement into a storm very creative keep up the good work Plot121

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