They were really good visuals and the flow was good. I like how you made an arguement into a storm very creative keep up the good work Plot121

"To give up or give in
Deciding is like fighting the wind
But if we just hope and try
Our hearts will surely win"

Beautiful wording and descriptions in this stanza and in the whole poem. I really liked this write, it was so enjoyable to read, good work! Keep writing, always and forever....

Its kinda greaat portraying about storm. it has a great thoughts that was very well express and very outstanding. the whole message is realy so true.. keep up the good work 5/5

Short but really good :) fav lines

Fake apathy sparks apologies
While flash floods and lightning strike
Let down again, we drown again
And hope is out of sight

the wording was just perfect and hit me :)
keep it up