Silence

by Faithless   Sep 21, 2008


For days I've kept myself in silence
I wonder if you miss my absence?
If you do, I'm sorry
I just need to give myself a balance

I'm driving without a license
I know it's been wrong all along
but I've taken that chances
to travel through the distance
knowing that it won't last for long

I wonder how much longer can I prolong?
I'm getting weak I'm no longer strong
But you kept me going with the song
The song that will keep me up all nightlong

Days has turn into weeks
Weeks has turn into months
When is the next time we will speak?
Will it be when you're married with a son?

Well maybe it's time for me to bid my farewell
It's time for me to break free from this shell
It's time for me to be release from this cell
It's time for me to be cast free from this spell

Maybe someday we will meet again
and we'll have our own stories to tell...

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    I like the concept of the poem, and where it is going, but the rhyming to me seems forced, don't be afraid to go outside the box:)

    I like this part though
    "Maybe someday we will meet again
    and we'll have our own stories to tell... "
    It makes its seem as if although you wish it wasn't so, you have to let them go

  • 14 years ago

    by XoXoBriannaoXoX

    This one was beautiful. i loved how well you expressed yourself.

  • 14 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    This is good. i like it =D

    ~Hannah~

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Some things are not meant to be, son.
    The sooner you move on, the better it will be for your own peace of mind.
    A very nice poem, you used the right words to convey your thoughts:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

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