Comments : Silence

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Some things are not meant to be, son.
    The sooner you move on, the better it will be for your own peace of mind.
    A very nice poem, you used the right words to convey your thoughts:)

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 14 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    This is good. i like it =D

    ~Hannah~

  • 14 years ago

    by XoXoBriannaoXoX

    This one was beautiful. i loved how well you expressed yourself.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jessie

    I like the concept of the poem, and where it is going, but the rhyming to me seems forced, don't be afraid to go outside the box:)

    I like this part though
    "Maybe someday we will meet again
    and we'll have our own stories to tell... "
    It makes its seem as if although you wish it wasn't so, you have to let them go