Wow Bert....What a intense piece you have penned. The imagery is fantastic. Your words pull the reader right into the depth of this poem. So much sadness and pain cry from your words. Such a heart wrencing write. Just brings tears to my eyes.
Excellent job!
You're in my thoughts and prayers.
Love Cindy

Sometimes the torture that we feel inside is overpowering , whatever the reason the intense pain is still there. An excellent write,your writings are always so sincere.