My Plea

by AnnMarie   Jun 6, 2004


My love has grown from day to day; I miss you more and more.
If love is hurting while apart, no wonder why my heart is sore.
I hold you close within my heart and in my arms you lie.
I cannot help the way I feel, nor do I wish to try.
One thing I know the future brings each and every day;
I love you more and more, my love, in each and every way.
The future is still uncertain; I know not where I’ll be.
But in the past few weeks I’ve prayed that you will always be with me.
The future holds uncertain thoughts and wonderment abound.
But I love you with all my heart and I shall always be around.
You need not fear the future, for I will always be with you.
I cannot help the way I feel, but the way I feel is true….
I hope someday that you will see the way my soul lies instill
For with all the love in my heart I ask if you will
Someday be forever mine, and always be in my life
And everyday I hope and pray that I may be your wife.
This is just a simple plea, a simple wish of mine.
That you will be with me until the end of time
I know that this is asking much, but much I do desire.
I know you may not understand, but my heart has been set afire.
Each time I am with you and each time I hold you tight,
I wonder if I will be the last and if I have the right.
For I am just a simple girl who lives a hectic life,
I only pray to God each night that I may be your wife
I cannot find the words to say that will make you forever mine
I only have one simple plea, to ask for all time.
If all the words came rolling down, as water in the sea,
None would ever be the same as “will you please love me”?

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  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I think you expressed yourself beautifully. It flowed so smoothly and obviously contains much love.
    The only criticism I have is the layout.
    Personally I would split it into stanzas or at least smaller lines dictated byu the rhyme scheme.

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Sometimes it got a bit confusing, but on the whole I liked it.
    The rhyme of life and wife is, well, very slightly cliche, but that was okay, there was an innocent joy in it that clearly made up for any mistakes or cliches...

    "I hold you close within my heart and in my arms you lie."

    I liked those lines, because it was as though you were saying, if you hold someone close in your heart, eventually they will lie in your arms, which is a beautiful image to imagine.

    //T.L.//

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Maybe limit your word usage to make it fit into stanzas. Otherwise it's good poem wise.

  • 18 years ago

    by kelS;

    It is actually an interesting and cute poem. i think some of your newer ones are better, but this one is really good also! keep it up!

    -Kelseyy.

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    I like the way its written. but the lines with afire and mine at the end of it sound wordy. its good.

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