Comments : Sissy! [im sorry] my apoligy to the heavens today

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    You are so talented. STAND TALL and keep writing 5/5 + 5 million more

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Awwwww :'( this made me cry!

    Sissy im sorry I screamed
    Its just you lovely face
    It hurts not to see

    ^
    This stanza touched me so much
    Knowing she's gone to a place far away
    And wanting to say your sorry for screaming at her
    But can't cos you can no longer see her face anymore :(
    Such a deep emotional poem hun!...

    5/5 great job

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