"LOVE"

This is great!!

~shanny~

Wow! I loved this poem, each line was so short, but so beautiful, it all came together perfectly and it's amasing how you could tell a story with so few words. Great work!

--Steph

Wow this reminds me of someone who broke up with someone and they found someone new who they loved more then anything....well i hope thats what this poem was about lol....5/5

Ohmygosh. I 'heart' it! It's so so true love is all of what you said. Ha. Wow.. I really enjoyed this one.

I think that this was the best poem of yours that i've read so far=D..although i found one thing:(sorry im so picky)
the 3rd stanza was not like the rest because it didn't rhyme like the others did. that gave this stanza a flat feeling and it deflated the cloud on which this poem sat by a bit. if that makes any sense. what i mean is it gave the poem a bit of a lower quality. but other than that this poem was amazing! 5/5 for sure, just if i were you i would try to make that stanza rhyme, thats all=D