Again I LOVE IT. very good.

Short but sweet :]

Short and sweet lit pretty boy said! I really like it, great job, perfect score!

Wow. this one actually is soo good. i can`t really explain why.. but probally because the flow is so good. wow. i couldn`t think of anyways to improve it! 5/5

I liked it it just tells me guyz do suck! well some do well thanks for the comment i apericate the comment this was a pleasure to read!!:)

Great job........i give a 5/5

Very very good! one of the best i read today! keep it up!
i loved the emotion with such simple phrases!

Its really good and really true :D great job

Good job short and sweet. I enjoy short poems. The flow and rhyme were good. You did a wonderful job! Keep it up!

Cayce

Very good poem! Short and to the point. I love poems that have short lines. It is a unique format. The flow is on target and the rhyme in it doesnt sound forced at all----Great write! Definately a 5/5

Wonderful. the shortness of the lines made this poem really effective. i lvoed it. a brillient work

Ruby

Another great poem, please keep writing.
xxxxx

Brilliannt. Short sweet and to the point.

The lines are so short, but the words are so powerful. Great job. I love reading love poems. This is an excellent piece. Keep it up.

>black&&blue

Good job, yet again. I thought it really did send out a message, even though it was sorta short. Very good job. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Good fast pace created by the short words, a nice effect, like the rhyming as well.

-biscuit-

I like the set up of this poem.
The feeling and everything I got when I read it was amazing.
Great Write.

The poem makes sense. The flow was stable.

I love this.. I simply love this. Nothing else to say. It was wonderful and something I wish I would have written.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

AnnMarie --
Wow, LOL it took me a while to find a poem of yours that I haven`t already done. Lol. I think the flow worked out perfectly -- the rhymes seemed a bit forced, but it was really good. Spelling and grammar, as usual, was perfect. Wonderful job, 5/5.

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood