Wow... this was really good... well written, it seemed to flow together nicely... wasnt forced it seems... keep it up...
Driver

Awww.. loved this one! short and sweet.. the descriptions were beautiful and you fitted in a lot of emotion and imagery 5/5

I think that this was the best poem of yours that i've read so far=D..although i found one thing:(sorry im so picky)
the 3rd stanza was not like the rest because it didn't rhyme like the others did. that gave this stanza a flat feeling and it deflated the cloud on which this poem sat by a bit. if that makes any sense. what i mean is it gave the poem a bit of a lower quality. but other than that this poem was amazing! 5/5 for sure, just if i were you i would try to make that stanza rhyme, thats all=D

Ohmygosh. I 'heart' it! It's so so true love is all of what you said. Ha. Wow.. I really enjoyed this one.

Wow this reminds me of someone who broke up with someone and they found someone new who they loved more then anything....well i hope thats what this poem was about lol....5/5

Wow! I loved this poem, each line was so short, but so beautiful, it all came together perfectly and it's amasing how you could tell a story with so few words. Great work!

--Steph

This is great!!

~shanny~