Brother 4

by she   Sep 21, 2008


I shouldn�t miss him
I have no right
For im the reson hes not here tonight

For see I heard his screams
I watched him bleed
But there I stood and did
nothing

[not done]

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  • 16 years ago

    by CrossCut

    Although its not done the work you have is rather powerful in a way. With more description and putting it in a final form, I thinnk it'll be an awesome poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Lkejfa;sldkafjsdfsdkf

    *screams*
    *stomps off*