I can't believe I missed this poem. This is one of the most beautiful love poems I've ever read.

Sweetie, you are an amazing poet, the way you capture your readers in just one breathe is austonishing. you have a beautiful way of using your words, these poems are the uttermost precious.

This poem is amazing! you are definately an artist i don'thave much on this web sight now, but i would apreciate someone who is this good to critique my work! but as for this wow!

Cute poem its really good!! keep writing!!

This is so go. I love it. Keep on writing.

In the last line 'heart' should be 'hearts' I do believe.
This is a great poem with very deep emotions put into it. I love it. Great write!
:)
5/5
*Brittney

Absolutely wonderful my dear!!!! the emotions are very widely expressed. I loved it!! 5/5 ^^,

Wow congratzzz ^^

That was a beautiful poem very inspiring and caring, almost brought a tear into my eye ;)