For you

by AnnMarie   Jun 6, 2004


For you I would count every star above,
And from the tallest mountain I would fall, for love.

For you I could make the desert rain,
Just so you may not be in pain.

For you I would walk near and far,
And only for you would I be able to catch a shooting star.

For you I would take the sun from the sky,
And give it to you whenever you cry.

For you I would take any curse,
Cause ill mean it when I say for better for worse?.

For you I would walk on the line of death,
Just for you to have one last breath.

To you I give my love forever and always,
Not today, tomorrow but for the rest of your days.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    THe poem was sweet but you may want to add some new rhymes. Some of these are too typical when you could have better ones you thought of but maybe never wrote.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Awww !! this was really really sweet =D I enjoyed reading it, it was amazing. You`re a terrific writer, Ann Marie. Keep it up! 5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. that was very sweet! i enjoyed reading that, the descriptions and imagery were beautiful.. and the rhymes worked well, great job!

    For you I would every count every star above,
    ^ here, you should only have "every" after count not before as well

    great job, very pleasurable read! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Nat

    Real good poem girl...i can relate a lot to somethin in it...strong words i love it! keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by PS

    LOVE IT. awesomeness!

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