Amazing:) Great flow, great emotion, great poem :) the word "Wow" Comes to mind :D

Hi Jennifer i read your request to read this poem so i did.First off the format you chose is different and not unappealing, your use of rhyme was quite good and the meter wasn't bad although slightly sticky here and there or maybe it's just the way i read it . all in all a very nice poem , in which you sounded thouroughly confused. LOL.Well done

Grant