by AnnMarie Jun 6, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Still scared of letting go, |
by Sandra D
This is a good poem, there's lots of emotion in it!! i like the topic too. some of the rhymes did seem a little forced... and at some parts, the flow was a little off... but it was still really good! |
This is really sad and full of emotiion. You paint such a vividly tragic picture and i love the ending about falling into his eyes. |
by Megann Lee
Ahhh. I love it. I can relate so well. Heh. Anyway, the poem was amaxing. |
by Truest Lies
"Trying so hard not to fall, |
by Kaylee
It got the point across though you might want to limit your use of the word heart every now and then. |