I have read your other poem and your style of writing really fascinates me it's so different and I like poems with a rhyming scheme but your poems have something that makes me want to read on. It's the fact that you are great at writing descriptions about things. Your wording is fantastic and it makes the reader HAVE to go on with out a doubt.
Although I don't understand the meaning of this poem it still holds YOUR deep emotions and thoughts. It's unique because it's as though only YOU can understand the poem:)
Once again Amazing poem
xxxxx
roxy oh and 5/5