This is excellent! I am really astonished! Flow was awesome and wording. Wowowowow.

I think this poem is one of your best ones so far. Really touching me a lot.

Keep on writing. Always. :)

May you have blessed last days of Ramadan. I will remember you in my prayers.

Nothing to mend in a heart of stone
The sword of truth is standing alone
The balance of power sways too far
Hope glimmering in a far away star

^^ somehow this stanza strikes me as so sad..Reading your poem I get the feeling you are going through some kind of ordeal...
I hope you are doing alright..

Take care,

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Very well written and the flow was great. It was extemely easy to read and the meaning intense.