Wow, Sierra, what an amazing piece, almost brought me to tears. I can feel the agonizing pain in every word. It is so sincere, vivid, powerful, ... just heartbreaking. The cadence was practically flawless, and the images/emotions portrayed were as well. Love the vocabulary used quite a bit; ethereal is one of my favorite words. My two absolute favorite stanzas were these:

"It played inside my head all night, every night
A broken record, I couldn't ignore-
Your voice, your face, the way you said
You couldn't love me anymore."

That just stung me -- I know that I have been jilted and felt like this before, and it truly is like a broken record: rubbing you raw with repetition until you can't stand it anymore.

"Now hearts are not made of paper
Therefore, I know they cannot break
But this pain, echoing within my soul,
I feel every moment that I'm awake."

Hearts may be unbreakable, but they sure can stretch paper thin sometimes from all the wear.

Splendid poem, loved it a bunch!
Keep writing down the bones,

You never lost your touch
you always were an amazing poet
but no matter how many poems of yours i read
im always amazed
awsome work

TFW