by AnnMarie Jun 6, 2004
category :
Life, society /
other
You are no longer looking at the world through rose-colored glasses, |
by -Usmi-
I bet ur dad was proud of u .. :) |
by holly
Loved the sweet sentiments in the poem all the thoughts were lovely, flow a bit fragmented but i loved the poem anyway xxALLYxx |
by UnToLd TrUtH
This was interesting....i really didn't get it to tell you the truth tell the end. |
I liked very much how you changed the first stanza a bit to make the last one. that gave the poem a stronger flow. Good poem!! I enjoyed reading this one as much as all your other ones. Don't lose your talent:) |
by Jessica
Very nice.. it was metaphorical and really made you think.. it flowed pretty well and the descriptions were good.. 5/5 |