I love this. its very good. and i know a ton of people who need to read this poem. awesomeness!

That was really pretty...i like the relations to colors in the poem...it ties it all together...it helps the flow...nice job...
Emma 5/5

That's really good.. I like the title, it stands out. And also I love the way that you ended it. The flow and rhythm of it was good and I liked the meaning behind the poem. 5/5*

I really liked the rhyme and flow of this poem. It's just seeing the word 'color' throws me off, because in Canada we spell it with a 'u' 'colour' lol. You aren't wrong, it's just different country's spelling. Good stuff, really like the poem. A nice write for your father, I'm sure he would like it.

OMg OMG where to start where to start? SO for one LOVEEEDDDD the title!!!! Thats one of my favorite epressions..looking at the world through rose-colored glasses! When I saw a request to read it I was like YES!..

Second....I feel the EXACT same way about my cousin...so many people try to help, but she dont want familys help..then says she has no one...some people just dont realize what they have, hopefully she'll realize before we're gone! I just loved this poem...loved the structure and the ending!!!
-Chels

Very nice poem. I thought the flow was great, Didn't see any rocky spots. Your rhyming didn't seem forced. And it was really good. Deserves more than a 5/5/... but.. I can only give a 5/5 tehe

`Taleee. xx.

Once again very well writen! keep up the good work!

Your flow, and rhythm was perfect..I felt your emotion through your words..It was a great poem!! 5/5

Wowww that was a breathtaking poem. I could relate to this too! I know what you are trying to say here, because I feel the same about my father. It flowed so nicely, I'm too speechless to say anything more about this flawless poem. Keep it up! 5/5

This is an awesome poem and i can rly relate great job keep up the good work i rly do luv this poem 5/5

Well frankly, I do think the rhyming seemed a bit forced, and maybe it would have been better to just abandon it altogether.

Other than that, I like the message you were pushing through. My favourite little phrase being this:
"curves and passes."
I may changed my msn screenname to that. It sounds great. lol.

It makes a good poem. Once again, good work. x

I love it! The flow is flawless and I love the title of the poem---The rhyme is good and helped the flow,,,I like how the lines are long and so it flows more smoothly---Great write! 5/5

Hmmm.
not as good as your previous work.
it ceased flow in some areas.
the words had some good meanings though.
4/5
~Emah

Ann Marie -
Sorry it took me so long to r/r/c this! I`ve been SOO busy lately. And much thanks for your comment.

I think its really great that you wrote your dad a poem. It flowed really well, and the rhyming was nice. It was great! I cried a little. =D
5/5

Samantha Hollywood

The second line of both the 1st and last stanza was too long to fit in with the rythem you had set up.

apart from that small proplem, the poem was an exellent work. what an original idea!!

Ruby

It was pretty sad, it was good though and i liked it and it made sense and was well worded
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I loved this poem it was so intense. It sserves a sa timely reminder to us all.
I loved the way you turned the begining stanza into the ending that gave the whole poem a real punch.

This is very different. But good. I can tell that you are a very unique writer. I added you to my favorites. 5/5

>black&&blue

Great write. It's a really good way of telling people to remember to look at it from another point of view. Good job! 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Like the way the end reflects the beginning and teh way that it rhymes and yet the stucture makes it appear to be a freeverse. intresting.

-biscuit-