Really sweet poem..I liked it. I kinda found it sad? I don't know if you meant for it to be. Or if it's just me? But I Liked it anyway.

It's different, and I really do like the idea of rose colored glasses. I think maybe if you organized it a bit so it flowed a little better and maybe replace some of the repeated words, you'd have a poem that would stand out.

Cute poem... I'm not sure what to say about it really, though. I'm not exactly sure what I thought. It was a bit confusing to me.

xDarkSuicidex 4.5

I liked this one, im sorry to hear about your dad though. This poem rhymed and flowed really well in some places, but not so good in others, other than thta i really liked it, great work.

--Steph

Very nice.. it was metaphorical and really made you think.. it flowed pretty well and the descriptions were good.. 5/5

I liked very much how you changed the first stanza a bit to make the last one. that gave the poem a stronger flow. Good poem!! I enjoyed reading this one as much as all your other ones. Don't lose your talent:)

This was interesting....i really didn't get it to tell you the truth tell the end.

Loved the sweet sentiments in the poem all the thoughts were lovely, flow a bit fragmented but i loved the poem anyway xxALLYxx

I bet ur dad was proud of u .. :)