My mistake

by AnnMarie   Jun 6, 2004


You know my horrible mistake,
And Jesus died for every sin I am to make.
So please don't let the worse happen,
For my life has not even began.
Dear Jesus I repent,
What I did was not intent.
O' angels hear my plea,
Please give grace to me.
Though grace is the last I deserve,
For through my life I have made a many curve.
A many times I have strayed,
And patently you have waited for days.
So once again I beg of you,
Not to let the worse come through.

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  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Nice theme very different. I like the way you worded it and loved the final 2 lines. Again its just the rhythm fluctuating between rhyming and not.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    It was short but very well penned, keep up the hard work and the writing will get better as you carry on writing
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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Ann Marie - the flow kind of messed me up a little on this poem. but the rhyming and theme was really nice. i think i kind of feel as you do. =D much thanks for your comments on my poetry.
    keep this up!

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    O? angels hear my plea,
    Please give grace to me.
    ----------------------------------------
    ^^Liked those lines alot.

    Again, You did a great job. Though the poems I've read so far are short, they're great. Keep up the fantastic work! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 18 years ago

    by Batman

    Yo im a christian!!!!ilove jesus!!!!
    This is pretty amazing!!!!

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