by Sweet lig Sep 22, 2008
category :
Special events /
christmas
September yet already I feel it coming |
by khobo
Nice poem. As I read it, I was able to picture it all in my head, with all the bright lights and decorations. I like how this poem brought out the joyous feelings in the air during the holidays. Good use of imagery. Good work =) |
by Hannah
Wow!!!!!! i guess i feel the that christmas is now coming hehe but here in my place its not like that! and i think ur p;ace is really nice to spend christmas.. great portraying it hun... 5/5 |
by Robert
A sweet poem very breif and to the point. Something you could do would use all the senses of a person so they can really get the full picture of the scene the more you describe the better the more the reader will want to be a part of the piece. Keep in mind this is a full body experence not just sight or sound Plot121... |